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Genevieve_Clarke
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2020-06-04 01:55

Please, please continue this story, this story is the best one of it's kind I have read in months, I just want it to go on forever, for Rika to continue all the way to being an ***** and finding her own happy life with someone she can accept and who can accept her, I love the humour of the story and I don't mind much how hard things are for her, it fills me with endearment how she keeps going.

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Hello guy's/girl's and whoever else is out there, I writing a review in hopes that this novel gets more attention, so far the story has been hilariously funny, at the same time it's been making me rage and cry in anger at the same time, the characters in the story especially the goddess has been trolling the mc since the beginning of the story, it's gotten so bad that even a coldblooded killer couldn't help be feel sorry for him, but of course that doesn't stop the goddess from giving him thorny early birthday gifts. But that's not all this story has to offer, so far the character design/development has been outstanding Rika, Orthis(i'm not sure i spelled his name right), Risa, and Sahria, has had the most character development so far, I've read far enough to read to a recent chapter where it looks like the love interest has appeared (this may go down the Yuri route after all, i mean he's still is a man at heart). The only thing it leads a little more of, is the world building, I have heard a little bit about what happened in the world, such as to why the racism between beastkin, and humans are so bad, but I have yet to get a general layout of the world on a Large scale view, such as to what kingdom, fiefdom, or area of the world he(she) currently lives in, or is whether or not that town is the only one that treats the beastkin like slaves or is it on a International scale. other than that, you can honestly say this novel has little to no flaws, and I'm really/seriously/honestly/hopefully looking forward to more chapters in the future.

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A rare gem. Quite different from most novels on this service. While several of the categories you might throw it into (reincarnation, system, gender-bender) are fairly common, this novel handles them differently. None of these elements feels intrusive. This isn’t a story about someone being given god like powers and going on a conquest, it is about several well developed characters trying to survive a bad situation. Some of the characters may seem irrational or evil at first, but attention to subtleties quickly hints towards deeper realities that are further revealed as the story goes on. With a little effort to try to understand their complexities, each character of the main cast is likeable. Writing quality is excellent, the author shows true talent with words. While there are a couple of typos and awkward choices of words near the start it remains easy to follow and the artful composition easily makes up for it. The later parts approach a level of finish you might find coming out of a traditional publishing house. That leaves only one last point. The only down side of this novel is that it is unfortunately abandoned. I normally avoid abandoned novels, but given the number of chapters I figured it might be completed so I gave it a try anyways. While it doesn’t reach the end, it develops enough to understand where things are going and leave the reader somewhat satisfied. Even in its current state I would recommend it. If the author does every decide to complete or restart the novel again I will eagerly read it.

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