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KingGeorg
KingGeorgLv145yr
2019-02-19 18:48

Normally I would nitpick any story for the best of the author. Yet I’m really unsure about what to say. I enjoy the torture of the Mc that is certainly is starting to accept what he is at some point and I would not wonder if he or she might get the best out of both worlds <evil grin>. I also enjoy that the Mc is not your run down the mill op character beings victim of his lust but rather the victim of the affection by others also thanks to its god given talents <evil grin>. I enjoy that the story got its naughty side but keeps grown up about it. In my opinion it’s one of the few good original works the only thing negative would be the update stability.-..but hey the author us doing this out of his own will spending his time writing for our enjoyment. 5 out of 5 for this one Ps: Well the only thing that might need some attention is some extra world building but I honestly don’t care because the character development is balancing this out.

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