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Review Detail of Cortz003 in A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

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Imagine Warhammer and a reincarnation novel mixed into each other with a system to top it off. The world contains races like Elves, Lizardmen, Tomb Kings, Djinns, Humans, Dwarves and Demons just to name a few. It begins with a war happening between the humans and the demons, your average isekai or reincarnation novel. However it puts a twist on things by changing the mc into a rat, similar to other system novels he evolves from a rat to 'ratmen' (Skaven). Although there are some minor spelling mistakes, reading it isn't that hard and the updates are frequent. However if i am to mention something its the fact that characters and monsters alike are not described well, or at all. For example it says Dwarves are small, but it doesn't tell me much other than that. As I am only on chapter 28 it may become more detailed later, but I don't know right now. Overall its a pretty good novel with a well built background and a stead development however character descriptions are rather limited.

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A Rattling Monster [Completed] (Editing in Progress)

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No you are totally right. Descriptions are lacking, by a lot, like, a lot. Spelling and grammar, my bad again. Especially the first 30 chapters, everything is bad or not very good.