Meh at 1st the concepts is nice, then author decided to bring mc son which is rihan in the mix and to make matter worst hes focusing on rihan too much and make mc like a side character... i mean wtf is he thinking? Why the fck he bring mc son for no reason? Just pop heres the reward for completing the quest, mc never had s3x but heres a son why the fck not... If he focus only on mc i think it will be a great novel, but sadly author making this a multiple protag trope which is killing the whole story
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