First of all well done author for such a great story But I want to say , don't make all story around revenge only Like if you plan to write 500 ch. Then around 150 to 180 ch. Close the revenge part. And introduce new characters and villains or enemies . Just don't make it like at last ch. Revenge will end Ok it will make it too forward. Straight forward , make some twists , and also plan to send him to other world Don't just trap him in ATG world , ok I like dragon marked war god Or asura one Chu Feng Real name don't come to mind now, Or anime ok Swallowed star and such . Try ok Well done . And you can request. Web novel though email or any other way you can find door ADs or other way to let author earn extra ๐ฐ. I hope thee shall continue .! ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โบ๐๐๐๐๐ซ๐๐ข๐ก๐ก๐น๐ณ๐๐ฑ๐ณ๐ก๐๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐๐บ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐โน๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ก๐ข๐ฉ๐บ๐ฉ๐๐๐๐ป๐ณ๐ด๐ต๐พ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ฆ๐ผ๐ฐ๐ฌ๐ถ๐ฃ๐ฃ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ค๐๐๐๐ โจ๐ ๐๐๐๐จ๐จ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐โธ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐ฏ
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