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First of all well done author for such a great story But I want to say , don't make all story around revenge only Like if you plan to write 500 ch. Then around 150 to 180 ch. Close the revenge part. And introduce new characters and villains or enemies . Just don't make it like at last ch. Revenge will end Ok it will make it too forward. Straight forward , make some twists , and also plan to send him to other world Don't just trap him in ATG world , ok I like dragon marked war god Or asura one Chu Feng Real name don't come to mind now, Or anime ok Swallowed star and such . Try ok Well done . And you can request. Web novel though email or any other way you can find door ADs or other way to let author earn extra ๐Ÿ’ฐ. I hope thee shall continue .! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜˜โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜“๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ‘น๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘บ๐Ÿ‘จ๐Ÿ‘ฎ๐Ÿ‘ฎ๐Ÿšฃ๐Ÿšฃ๐ŸŠโ›น๐Ÿ’‘๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’‹๐Ÿ’„๐Ÿ’„๐Ÿ‘ก๐Ÿ‘ข๐ŸŽฉ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿฉ๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ‡๐Ÿ‡๐Ÿป๐ŸŒณ๐ŸŒด๐ŸŒต๐ŸŒพ๐Ÿ“๐Ÿ“๐Ÿ๐Ÿ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿข๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿฐ๐Ÿฌ๐Ÿถ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿฃ๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿฅ๐Ÿค๐ŸŒŽ๐ŸŒƒ๐ŸŒ„๐ŸŒ…โ™จ๐ŸŒ…๐Ÿš๐Ÿšž๐Ÿšž๐Ÿšจ๐Ÿšจ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŒ ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽ๐ŸŽโ›ธ๐ŸŽฎ๐ŸŽฎ๐ŸŽฏ

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