So far a okay story. Nothing new though. The characters are pretty bland, the flow could be better. A lot of plotholes and a writing which is mediocre. Nonetheless I would be interested in the novel if not the scenario would be so overused and generic. My goal is not to discourage the author. I just want to say that there is a lot potential to improve.
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