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2018-08-14 21:23

The MC does not resemble any Young Master of any Qidian or Wuxia Novel I've read soo Far From Being excited to disappointed People will alwayz have different tastes But why Give the MC who already has enough Talent?? A God System A God (literally) Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master things When has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels??😐 You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique.... The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for Anything All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing With all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 level WHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators??? Why give him a System even The God?? Better to remove it all As a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs

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MasterRabbink
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--Trevon couldn't read this-- Which young master? There are many 'type' of Young Masters. * He is not the crippled turned genius by 'cheat' type. (The most common MC type) For example: Almost all. Lol. Last Wish System and Devouring Earth is this. Library of Heaven Path is this too. Usually this type is 'lucky' and 'hardworking'. * He is not the genius young master (like in Bai's novel.) Usually added with '*****' characteristic. This character usually 'OP' from the beginning. Usually become the Lead Male in cultivation based romantic fiction. There 2 types of arrogant young masters, the genius and the coward 'bully'. * He is not the main antagonist aka the family genius/family that appeared after the Cannon Fooder, (This Rabbink believes at one point Trevon would have this role.) (You can find this type mostly in Emperor's Domination). For example in Webnovel's Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, it is Cheng Xiang (Check chapter 17) and later Cheng Xiao Yuan (Chapter 38). (This is why it is never ended, next is the father and uncle, and many more. Lol.). * He is the coward young master that taunted the hero/starting the fight (For example in Ancient Strengthening Technique) aka the Cannon Fooder himself. Usually this type is arrogant and perverted but actually weak and used their family name. Most fight started by either 'treasure' (usually in auction scene), 'woman' (in the street or restaurant), or competing for a table (in restaurant) (Some genius antagonist also would do these). After this type of young master defeated, the main antagonist will appear. Next, the father, and the rest of elders. (This is Trevon current role. Volume 2 will be the start of his fight with common MC type.). For example in Webnovel's Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, it is Cheng Hao. (Check chapter 15). I have to admit he hadn't had the chance to show his 'bully'-ness. Probably based on my current plan, it would start in Volume 3. Lol. I also agree people have different taste. This type of MC is a niche and uncommon. Thank you for trying to read. :D --End of what Trevon couldn't read--

MasterRabbink
MasterRabbinkAuthor

--Trevon couldn't read this-- Some new points here: --Trevon couldn't read this-- (Aka might contains spoiler) But why Give the MC who already has enough Talent?? A God System A God (literally) * Because that is this Rabbink's theme. All my novels is about becoming a God. (Basically Xianxia is an immortality story. Reaching the peak to become a super powerful OP being). He is a genius turned 'disaster'. No 'desire' to cultivate. There is a reason. Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master things * I have a time table of when a character would level up. It took years, so this is why I have a 'slow' pace warning. I need to do this more better about the 'power up' I admit. If you want to see the progress, wait for the time skip. When has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels??😐 * Well,... This is one of the 'illogical' but please accept this, This Rabbink couldn't deny this. Lol. My only reasoning is he want a 'good' wife. Bad one, I admit. You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique.... * They have... However, the timeline is still in week, while I made each level in years. Including for those geniuses. I made them harder to level. For example to reach Lv 0 to Lv 1, it would take genius 1 year and common people 1.5 year (for human). So you won't be able to see in 2 weeks. :D The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for Anything *He had. He doing some missions, finding money... later he will shown more 'preparation'. Also the young master style's asking help from his 'family'. He would do more, but the closer to the beast wave. The family had plan... You see the number of Peak Grand Elders in the Chapter 54. There is a reason why that number came there. All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing * This is the character. His ambition is only getting as many girls as possible as harem member. Why he was lazy. If you had 1 billion, do you still had ambition to become a billionaire? Some Lottery winner become a 'lazy' this is what happened. With all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 level WHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators??? * His cheat didn't allow him to go that far in 2 weeks. Wait for years. Soon it would also disappear too. Why give him a System even The God?? Better to remove it all * This is the Rabbink theme and goal, to train a God. Because that is the 'peak' achievement possible. This is the Rabbink's goal. As a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs What is USS? TSS or MP? * Ultimate Scheming System? -> This is the 'happy' go lucky. Sometimes I confused with the goal. What is his goal? To revive a girl? to get stronger? He is also have no goal. I like his 'smart' tactic. I admit to want this way. Like The Deer and Cauldron. Unfortunately Trevon didn't have this OP-ness. * The Strongest System? -> I like this one. However, Ling Fan is is OP. Other System made easy, but I don't want to be too easy. This is an OP system, a God (he is a recruiter system, so a team building) but he needed to level it, but it is hard (expensive). However, Trevon is 'weak'. Red my fourth novel idea started rich, so he could become stronger faster. * Martial Peak? -> Definitely not this one. This is the 'crippled' turned genius type. So this is totally different. My idea came from A Will Eternal's cowardliness (the early phase), A Histroy Strongest Brother's antagonist position (not the 'genius' but the type of his opponent), and especially Hedonist Sovereign's position (the use of being a rich young master.) Add the cowardliness of AWE and put it in HS position. --End of what Trevon couldn't read--

MasterRabbink
MasterRabbinkAuthor

--Trevon couldn't read this-- This Rabbink is stuck again. Volume 2 is harder with the 'type' I want to write. I made a huge plot mistake that I found later and need to repair some plot holes in previous chapter. A bit stressed. (T_T) So I am watching Deer and Cauldron serial while reading comments. Lol. All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing His ambition for now is a 'Crystal Fox Demon' and a Golden Elf. He become a God because he couldn't reject it and also for that reason, and that reason alone. Lol. --End of What Trevon couldn't read--

MasterRabbink:--Trevon couldn't read this-- Some new points here: --Trevon couldn't read this-- (Aka might contains spoiler) But why Give the MC who already has enough Talent?? A God System A God (literally) * Because that is this Rabbink's theme. All my novels is about becoming a God. (Basically Xianxia is an immortality story. Reaching the peak to become a super powerful OP being). He is a genius turned 'disaster'. No 'desire' to cultivate. There is a reason. Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master things * I have a time table of when a character would level up. It took years, so this is why I have a 'slow' pace warning. I need to do this more better about the 'power up' I admit. If you want to see the progress, wait for the time skip. When has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels??😐 * Well,... This is one of the 'illogical' but please accept this, This Rabbink couldn't deny this. Lol. My only reasoning is he want a 'good' wife. Bad one, I admit. You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique.... * They have... However, the timeline is still in week, while I made each level in years. Including for those geniuses. I made them harder to level. For example to reach Lv 0 to Lv 1, it would take genius 1 year and common people 1.5 year (for human). So you won't be able to see in 2 weeks. :D The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for Anything *He had. He doing some missions, finding money... later he will shown more 'preparation'. Also the young master style's asking help from his 'family'. He would do more, but the closer to the beast wave. The family had plan... You see the number of Peak Grand Elders in the Chapter 54. There is a reason why that number came there. All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing * This is the character. His ambition is only getting as many girls as possible as harem member. Why he was lazy. If you had 1 billion, do you still had ambition to become a billionaire? Some Lottery winner become a 'lazy' this is what happened. With all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 level WHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators??? * His cheat didn't allow him to go that far in 2 weeks. Wait for years. Soon it would also disappear too. Why give him a System even The God?? Better to remove it all * This is the Rabbink theme and goal, to train a God. Because that is the 'peak' achievement possible. This is the Rabbink's goal. As a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs What is USS? TSS or MP? * Ultimate Scheming System? -> This is the 'happy' go lucky. Sometimes I confused with the goal. What is his goal? To revive a girl? to get stronger? He is also have no goal. I like his 'smart' tactic. I admit to want this way. Like The Deer and Cauldron. Unfortunately Trevon didn't have this OP-ness. * The Strongest System? -> I like this one. However, Ling Fan is is OP. Other System made easy, but I don't want to be too easy. This is an OP system, a God (he is a recruiter system, so a team building) but he needed to level it, but it is hard (expensive). However, Trevon is 'weak'. Red my fourth novel idea started rich, so he could become stronger faster. * Martial Peak? -> Definitely not this one. This is the 'crippled' turned genius type. So this is totally different. My idea came from A Will Eternal's cowardliness (the early phase), A Histroy Strongest Brother's antagonist position (not the 'genius' but the type of his opponent), and especially Hedonist Sovereign's position (the use of being a rich young master.) Add the cowardliness of AWE and put it in HS position. --End of what Trevon couldn't read--
KingLique95
KingLique95Lv5

I do get what you want his role to be but since his role is to get that Huge Harem etc He can't be tt weak type Young Master or You can make him the Tiger- Sheep Young Master like the usual Young Master from Big Clans who pretend to be weak only to show off later in front of Galz etc

MasterRabbink:--Trevon couldn't read this-- Which young master? There are many 'type' of Young Masters. * He is not the crippled turned genius by 'cheat' type. (The most common MC type) For example: Almost all. Lol. Last Wish System and Devouring Earth is this. Library of Heaven Path is this too. Usually this type is 'lucky' and 'hardworking'. * He is not the genius young master (like in Bai's novel.) Usually added with '*****' characteristic. This character usually 'OP' from the beginning. Usually become the Lead Male in cultivation based romantic fiction. There 2 types of arrogant young masters, the genius and the coward 'bully'. * He is not the main antagonist aka the family genius/family that appeared after the Cannon Fooder, (This Rabbink believes at one point Trevon would have this role.) (You can find this type mostly in Emperor's Domination). For example in Webnovel's Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, it is Cheng Xiang (Check chapter 17) and later Cheng Xiao Yuan (Chapter 38). (This is why it is never ended, next is the father and uncle, and many more. Lol.). * He is the coward young master that taunted the hero/starting the fight (For example in Ancient Strengthening Technique) aka the Cannon Fooder himself. Usually this type is arrogant and perverted but actually weak and used their family name. Most fight started by either 'treasure' (usually in auction scene), 'woman' (in the street or restaurant), or competing for a table (in restaurant) (Some genius antagonist also would do these). After this type of young master defeated, the main antagonist will appear. Next, the father, and the rest of elders. (This is Trevon current role. Volume 2 will be the start of his fight with common MC type.). For example in Webnovel's Alchemy Emperor of the Divine Dao, it is Cheng Hao. (Check chapter 15). I have to admit he hadn't had the chance to show his 'bully'-ness. Probably based on my current plan, it would start in Volume 3. Lol. I also agree people have different taste. This type of MC is a niche and uncommon. Thank you for trying to read. :D --End of what Trevon couldn't read--
KingLique95
KingLique95Lv5

Well it's okae Master Rabbink will wait to see many improvements but for a System Book make it faster to Move On he can't still be stuck and repeat Missions are boring at least make him get more Energy so he levelz

MasterRabbink:--Trevon couldn't read this-- This Rabbink is stuck again. Volume 2 is harder with the 'type' I want to write. I made a huge plot mistake that I found later and need to repair some plot holes in previous chapter. A bit stressed. (T_T) So I am watching Deer and Cauldron serial while reading comments. Lol. All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing His ambition for now is a 'Crystal Fox Demon' and a Golden Elf. He become a God because he couldn't reject it and also for that reason, and that reason alone. Lol. --End of What Trevon couldn't read--
MasterRabbink
MasterRabbinkAuthor

This is my big mistake. Gwahahaha. -Trevon couldn't read this-- The first 60 is very slow. I need to practice about 'leveling' system. So far my only solution is the time skip. There would be 'special' bonus that he would use based on my plan (his cheating could only last him until < Rank 3). It is based on his destiny as an antihero. Like USS's destiny is to scheme -End of what Trevon could read this--.

KingLique95:Well it's okae Master Rabbink will wait to see many improvements but for a System Book make it faster to Move On he can't still be stuck and repeat Missions are boring at least make him get more Energy so he levelz
donutoutlaw
donutoutlawLv6

In ancient China, not everyone that goes to a brothel 'do' the 'entertainers'. They are those that just listen to courtesan that are talented in music and/or dancing while drinking with thier buddies. Often the guest just brag to the girls.

CestMoi
CestMoiLv14

Ehemmmmm you forgot this one crucial fact. There are eight cultivation speed. ●Untalented ●Normal ●Talented ●Genius >Once in a century ●Super Genius >Once in a millenia ●Genius among Geniuses >Once in a 10,000 yr ●Child/Loved by heaven >Once in a 100k to million years type of genius ●MC

MasterRabbink:--Trevon couldn't read this-- Some new points here: --Trevon couldn't read this-- (Aka might contains spoiler) But why Give the MC who already has enough Talent?? A God System A God (literally) * Because that is this Rabbink's theme. All my novels is about becoming a God. (Basically Xianxia is an immortality story. Reaching the peak to become a super powerful OP being). He is a genius turned 'disaster'. No 'desire' to cultivate. There is a reason. Yet he can't even level up or do any MeaningFul Young Master things * I have a time table of when a character would level up. It took years, so this is why I have a 'slow' pace warning. I need to do this more better about the 'power up' I admit. If you want to see the progress, wait for the time skip. When has there ever been a Virgin Notorious Young Master who is known for Visiting brothels??😐 * Well,... This is one of the 'illogical' but please accept this, This Rabbink couldn't deny this. Lol. My only reasoning is he want a 'good' wife. Bad one, I admit. You show pipo with Cultivation Speed 90+ yet 50chaps in they haven't even begun Cultivating when ey have the technique.... * They have... However, the timeline is still in week, while I made each level in years. Including for those geniuses. I made them harder to level. For example to reach Lv 0 to Lv 1, it would take genius 1 year and common people 1.5 year (for human). So you won't be able to see in 2 weeks. :D The MC is the 1st to know abwt a Beast Tide yet he doesn't even prepare for Anything *He had. He doing some missions, finding money... later he will shown more 'preparation'. Also the young master style's asking help from his 'family'. He would do more, but the closer to the beast wave. The family had plan... You see the number of Peak Grand Elders in the Chapter 54. There is a reason why that number came there. All the Young Masters in any Novel have ambition n do all to make sure THEIR AMBITION IS fulfilled YEt this Young Master does nothing * This is the character. His ambition is only getting as many girls as possible as harem member. Why he was lazy. If you had 1 billion, do you still had ambition to become a billionaire? Some Lottery winner become a 'lazy' this is what happened. With all his talents and advantages still stuck on 1 level WHATS his Difference frm Normal Cultivators??? * His cheat didn't allow him to go that far in 2 weeks. Wait for years. Soon it would also disappear too. Why give him a System even The God?? Better to remove it all * This is the Rabbink theme and goal, to train a God. Because that is the 'peak' achievement possible. This is the Rabbink's goal. As a Fellow Reader do Check system Novels like USS n TSS even MP and see how they handle their MCs What is USS? TSS or MP? * Ultimate Scheming System? -> This is the 'happy' go lucky. Sometimes I confused with the goal. What is his goal? To revive a girl? to get stronger? He is also have no goal. I like his 'smart' tactic. I admit to want this way. Like The Deer and Cauldron. Unfortunately Trevon didn't have this OP-ness. * The Strongest System? -> I like this one. However, Ling Fan is is OP. Other System made easy, but I don't want to be too easy. This is an OP system, a God (he is a recruiter system, so a team building) but he needed to level it, but it is hard (expensive). However, Trevon is 'weak'. Red my fourth novel idea started rich, so he could become stronger faster. * Martial Peak? -> Definitely not this one. This is the 'crippled' turned genius type. So this is totally different. My idea came from A Will Eternal's cowardliness (the early phase), A Histroy Strongest Brother's antagonist position (not the 'genius' but the type of his opponent), and especially Hedonist Sovereign's position (the use of being a rich young master.) Add the cowardliness of AWE and put it in HS position. --End of what Trevon couldn't read--
MasterRabbink
MasterRabbinkAuthor

Welp... I have the cultivation rate table for Genius and Normal... However, the rest is on my mind. Gwahahaha. Nevertheless, people who dares to take life and death risk and survive would be faster (aka MC who faceslapping arrogant young masters left and right and resulted into chased by thousand generations of the arrogant young master).

CestMoi:Ehemmmmm you forgot this one crucial fact. There are eight cultivation speed. ●Untalented ●Normal ●Talented ●Genius >Once in a century ●Super Genius >Once in a millenia ●Genius among Geniuses >Once in a 10,000 yr ●Child/Loved by heaven >Once in a 100k to million years type of genius ●MC
FengTian
FengTianLv4

MC [Against Heaven, its always like this~ breaking the natural order of thingz, skippin' generations, not allowing elders demonstration of authority, saving the weak from bullied in a dog eat dog world, getting girlz eyed by young master (shills hahahaha), and the worst, not giving FACE: FACE is everything. HAHA. I bet they must be a disaster for those in higher positions.]

CestMoi:Ehemmmmm you forgot this one crucial fact. There are eight cultivation speed. ●Untalented ●Normal ●Talented ●Genius >Once in a century ●Super Genius >Once in a millenia ●Genius among Geniuses >Once in a 10,000 yr ●Child/Loved by heaven >Once in a 100k to million years type of genius ●MC
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