Review Detail of Gyihhuhu_ in The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis
Review detail
Intentional 1-star and spoiler rating to attract attention. Sorry if you've been fooled. This is a rewrite of TGWH, and the reason I did so were due to the immense amount of mistakes I made and the redundant fillers I created—nothing to hide, and nothing to drastic. Now, I didn't intend to make this review at first. But I had to, because some readers just jump to conclusions and don't even bother to think before writing one-star reviews— and that's not even my main reason. The problem some people have is the fact that I made the protagonist evil this. True evil, like, really really, evil. And there are plausible justifications for his behavior, it's not like he just woke up one day and decided to **** on his father for fun and kill babies for giggles. Before you comment on the protagonist's behavior, at least wait before his backstory is revealed and fleshed out — that's the first message of this review. Things removed and redone in this version are stated below - #Revenge - the Haruno matter will be finished more faster in this version. I wanted to write more in this review, but I'm lazy and I don't want to, so go ahead and **** yourself.
The Golden Watch Of Hypnosis
Gyihhuhu_
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I hate your other story that tried too hard to be good with depth and character. Thank you, I always thought that if you decided to rewrite this story it would of turned out way better than that other piece of junk you were writing, just being honest....But I’m happy you decided to rewrite this and I feel like this might be one of the best webnovels. It makes me happy that you have decided to give this another go instead of that other piece of junk. But that doesn’t mean I’m not going to br a dick about it.
Cut each banana half into 3 or 4 pieces. Mix sugar and cinnamon together in a shallow bowl. Melt butter in a skillet over medium-low heat; add banana slices and cook until golden brown, 5 to 10 minutes. Transfer banana slices to a paper towel-lined plate. Coat banana slices, 1 at a time, with cinnamon-sugar.
Oere:Cut each banana half into 3 or 4 pieces. Mix sugar and cinnamon together in a shallow bowl. Melt butter in a skillet over medium-low heat; add banana slices and cook until golden brown, 5 to 10 minutes. Transfer banana slices to a paper towel-lined plate. Coat banana slices, 1 at a time, with cinnamon-sugar.
