Review Detail of inquisitive in eFate: An MMO Story

Great start to the story and have really tried to do a solid start to world building and how everything fits together. I enjoy the unique spin on both the leveling system and the apparent freedom available with skill usage. It can be seen from some of the fights how this plays out and so far is having a good showing. It appears that while the MC is competitive he is not OP at all and has some shortcomings he has to overcome and promises for some good character growth. Thanks for the work on the novel so far and am looking forward to how it develops into book 2 and we can see what competitive PvP would be like.