Review Detail of Tianyaku in Dragonborn Saga

well other than the atrocious spelling, random sentences that are broken and mean nothing; the character development is terrible. steadily changing dates/abilities in story forgetting abilities he just gave. making matches for cats and dragons to be the same, highly upsetting, pro9took out half his viewers when he did that. but just overall lazy with no real creative spark of his own to add to a already wonderful world.