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Review Detail of CagieWagie in Dragonborn Saga

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CagieWagie
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Heads up for new readers this novel generally reads like a badly translated and edited chinese novel with info dumps about the lore of Skyrim blended into the mix. I mean you got elements of cultivation methods, clans and systems that's common for these types. I mean you can already tell that they speak like the chacters of a xianxia novel instead of the way the characters in the game talk and interact. If you're not proficient at English then you won't mind the errors and fangled story flow but for others like me it's extremely grating and a huge turn off from continuing with the story. Terms are used incorrectly and some of the annoying dialogue can be skipped. Little logic is applied as to why the protagonist do questionable stuff. Might be some sort of power fantasy for the author. The first few chapters that's been edited we're actually quite good but down the line it gets worse with the addition of imo unnecessary CN novel elements. Those that rate it highly are mostly rating it cause they're fans of the game but those who came for a good and engaging story with a reasonable standard of writing quality will definitely be disappointed.

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UrAverageSkeleton
UrAverageSkeletonLv5UrAverageSkeleton

Actually I really like it there might be a few errors here and there but it’s a good story

CagieWagie
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Since I'm fluent in english and a prolific reader but I have no patience for the Mandarin sentence structure of novels in this site. It feels like I'm being lobotomized by a potato peeler everytime I try to read this.

UrAverageSkeleton:Actually I really like it there might be a few errors here and there but it’s a good story
UrAverageSkeleton
UrAverageSkeletonLv5UrAverageSkeleton

I’m a native English speaker and it’s really not that bad if you really hate it as much as you describe it you should see a doctor you most likely have a phobia

CagieWagie:Since I'm fluent in english and a prolific reader but I have no patience for the Mandarin sentence structure of novels in this site. It feels like I'm being lobotomized by a potato peeler everytime I try to read this.
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4THIZZGATOR

or you might be a bit simple.

UrAverageSkeleton:I’m a native English speaker and it’s really not that bad if you really hate it as much as you describe it you should see a doctor you most likely have a phobia
UrAverageSkeleton
UrAverageSkeletonLv5UrAverageSkeleton

Me? Simple?

THIZZGATOR:or you might be a bit simple.