Review Detail of GRoy in Fantasy System

Positive: nice story, good writing. It doesn't seem like is your first novel 👍 Negative: it's a friking mashup between adventure/ immortal/ japanese fiction. I mean, adventurer style of lvl up with a system, in a immortal world, with skills from japanese fiction! Wdf... If that setting of immortal world was absent, it would be a great +. Is pretty confusing, you know. I'm not a native english speaker , so excuse my poor grammar. Keep up the good work.