Review Detail of Imrael in Fantasy System

Author if you are reading this in which case I really hope you do read the comments that are posted beside the fact that there are a lot of explanations missing and the fact about if the monster die then the owner will die to which you have to correct and how he got stronger and his family didn't even ask or try to know more about the subject or even the excuse that the main character of the story should prepare to explain his sudden growth and gain of strengthyou should watch Monster Paradise which will give you more ideas of outlines and Angels to better improve the story end some moral of the story should be explained more talking and plot explaining I am a chapter 14 right now so I still don't know more about the story and I was considering not reading anymore because of the lack of these things so please do some improvement with that your story will be very enjoyable thanks for reading.