Review Detail of Gilver_1116 in Monster Empire: The Conquest

Accidentally opened the worked, and unexpectedly I liked the story very much. The story is progressing at a good pace. The main character is still unveiled, but only 11 chapters are out so far, so I'll be looking forward to his development. The world's set up is not clear yet and the author still has room to grow in clearly presenting the world we are shown. The language has room to be improved as well, but I wouldn't say it is at the level where your eyes are bleeding. Anyway best wishes for the author and I am expecting a lot from you.