Review Detail of Vonte in Once Human, Now a Parasite

Sure thing, I was going to proofread them, just not now as Finals are approaching. As for the trust problems, I know it was rush but there's nothing I can do about it, I have written this a long time ago and it's too late to change what happened. Anyways, thanks for posting your review, I appreciate how you clarified your reasons and stated what you don't like, unlike other people. Peace

Thank you for being able to handle constructive criticism. The story is definitely based on an unique, interesting idea.

So I need to stay away from this novel uhh thank you..

It's a shame this became the number one review. As the author said, the story had already been long since structured past that point and it really opens up thereafter. Though I do see the author's original intent, no matter how much we tell ourselves we'll never do this or that - when we feel a genuine connection of any type (friendship or relationship) all old hangups go out the window without us ever being consulted.

Maybe because he knows that he's strong enough to suppress the girl if she will betray him?.......?

I don't think so. If I'm not wrong. I remember reading that 'X' sealed his hate or something. That might have lessened his negative feelings towards Claudia his ex-wife. I'm not sure though. I'm too lazy to check the previous chapters.

If I'm not wrong. I remember reading that 'X' sealed his hate or something. That might have lessened/temporary hidden his negative feelings towards Claudia his ex-wife that let him fall in love again. I'm not sure though. I'm too lazy to check the previous chapters.

*temporarily

If you actually read the story you would know that his negative emotions got sealed. Also, he falls for her because she was found to be in a similar situation as him.

it's your story, it's not too late to change it. unless you want to keep it as a bad story, then sure, leave it as is! i'll never understand people like you who think it's okay to leave the beginning in such a horribly badly written state, and somehow keep on writing as if more chapters will somehow fix your mistakes.

You think it's a bad beginning while I don't, each their opinions.

Bro, you really need to read this novel. I admit the beginning is very rushed but it gets better later on. I had also criticize for the rushed beginning but thankfully I stayed. Good points are: Calm mc No harem Ruthless mc Mc devoted to lover OP mc (Being able to fight higher level, not crazily OP) Jack of all trade (Not shown much) 200+ chapters in a month For me there is only 2 bad points. The first one is the rushed beginning which has many bad points in it. The second one is something that many if not all good novels have, which is not enough chapters to read. It is bad point in a good way.... or is it good point in a bad way. For those who’ll say I’m ungrateful for saying the second bad points especially to this novel that has 200+ chapters in a month, it is just a joke.

You could just read it yourself for a couple of chapters. You know, form your own opinion.

=D

For peoppe, that directly ignores details and just reads the dialog, you are one profound future teller, pffft. Op, at least read the details that has no speech marks " ", so you could understand the story for a bit.

Just wanted to say my name is Davonte nice to meet another vonte out in the world

Hey what’s up Davonte!!

Nothing much man just out here reading novels in my spare time

I kinda agree with you author. Changing those details would mean rewriting a looooot of things in an already developed story. All you could do is change the latter parts if you desire

I kinda agree with you author. Changing those details would mean rewriting a looooot of things in an already developed story. All you could do is change the latter parts if you desire