This is a good story in general, my problems are in chapter 44 onwards, I will just say one thing, authors who nerf their perssonage, are for being unable to follow the stories, with the powers that they had given to the MC's until that moment. IF YOU DON'T WANT TO USE A POWER, OR THINK IT IS DIFFICULT TO WRITE IF USING THIS POWER IN THE FUTURE, JUST DO NOT GIVE THE MC OR SOMETHING BUT IT WILL NOT NERF THE FUCKING PERSONSONAGE! I make this criticism to any and all authors who come to nerfy their personage.

Really ****ed up story. Just letting the innocent suffer, let girls be raped, destroy the entire society is already bad. Really ****ed up story mate. All the people who want Harry Potter world to be fixed and happy ending don read this. it is all about destroying the harry potter world. destroying good destroying bad, destroying evil, destroying innocents, letting girls be raped, do whatever he wants, AND the most ****ed up is that, GODS are proud of all this action. Really ****ed up story.

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This is a true hidden gem, and the best HP fanfiction I've read to date. (Even the OC added fits in with the world seamlessly.) I can't wait to see how the novel progresses past the current world visited, my only negative opinion regarding this novel is that the first couple chapters could have been handled better, but it truly is a unique reincarnation novel. Also, those complaining about how he dominates and crashes the economy need to remember that wizards are stupid af and have literally no common sense so it's best treating everyone non-muggle as having very low IQ and EQ.

I really like this novel, but I had to remove some stars from the review due to the stupid and surreal way that the MC uses to attack the economy of the country. It is simply impossible for a government to allow such a clear way to attack the economy. I realized that the way MC attacked the country's economy is completely irrational. Even though 1G of 500 years ago equals 100,000G today would not make families unable to pay debts. I suck at explaining things, but I'll try. (but just look at how it works in the real world, with dolar 100 years ago having much more purchasing power, but there is no way for anyone to use this to attack the economy). Just as the value of the currency has decreased, wages and product prices have risen. While 500 years ago a family's wealth would be around 10G, today it would be 1,000,000 so the rich could pay off their debts without any problems. Another important factor to take into account is that wizards use gold coins. Unlike paper money, which has no real value and therefore goes through so many fluctuations, gold coins devalue much less because gold has real value. The value of gold usually increases more than it decreases. I wouldn't be surprised if 100G to 300 years ago is the equivalent of 1G today. It is also worth mentioning that with wizards being extremely isolationist they must have a self-sustaining internal market free of external influences and therefore the value of galleons would have an even lower fluctuation. It is simply impossible for the mc to be able to affect the economy so much on the basis of damages, as the wealthy would never create a tax that they were unable to pay. (Sorry for any erros i used google translator)

I do enjoy the story it's slow but not to slow and i like how your playing with the goblins and back story a lot instead of the main (HP) plot at the start making it your own story instead of a follow the (HP) plot right away story. though i do worry you will go to fast and break your pacing. I hope that you will do some worlds fully and not jump between worlds quickly like the predecessor to this story as that can be annoying and doesn't build plot. Overall I like it but i have seen that you can mess up pace in your books. Keep up the good work

As of chapter 18: Interesting story with good character writing so far with good backgrounds of the world themselves. The only real problem that brings the story down is the grammar and spelling that breaks the flow of the story, especially when a completely random word is used and you have to decipher the sentence. Though still readable.

meh

Meh it’s an okay read. ..........................................................................................................................................................