As of the latest chapter, other than the grammar mistakes and how the interactions between characters seem kinda awkward, I'm liking it so far. Thanks for writing!
Thanks, I plan to have a proof reader helping me with my grammar soon. It's always been a weak point of mine. but thanks for the feedback! it means alot. i'm still getting used to writing again since its been about 4 years since the last time i wrote for an audience.