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Rachel_Jacob
Rachel_JacobLv44yr
2020-06-30 03:44

The writing quality of this story was really good however as a reader I feel frustrated due to the fact that it doesn't have a proper ending. There is no closure to any of the characters the author has just abruptly ended the story. For heaven sake the main character in the beginning of the story keeps hinting that he will branch out from the music industry to the film industry and so on, but that does not happen, forget that atlest end the story in such a manner that he reached the peak of the music industry. The character development is really bad. It is such a pity that the author left the readers hanging after introducing so many interesting plots. What happens to Liu Yan and Zhao Zilin, what happens to Liang Feng and his grandfather, to Cao Feifei and her family the author ha snot written a conclusion to even a single character in the novel. As a personal note I would like to say that it was initially a extremely well written book and I had such high hopes for the book. I guess greater the expectation greater the disappointment.

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RandomMobA
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TBh, i came to this Novel cause of the elegant cover art and was expecting something refined and gallant read. Considering how this was supposed to be a novel about the other world's entertainment industry. However i was proven wrong. Just the first chapter alone immediately obliterated that impression. Instead of a calm protagonist or a badass protagonist. We get a 2nd generation form xianxia world type of protagonist. But instead of acting that role for disguise sake like those guys from (TTNH, OEM) He was simply showing his true nature. I don't see any redeeming factor in our mc. Honestly if he wasn't the novel protag. The mc would have already ended destroyed and humiliated by a true mc type. I feel like the mc was supposed to be reincarnated to a cultivation world but samsara made a mistake and send him to this world Instead. I hate how he instantly got cocky just right after knowing that he hold the entertainment knowledge superiority. He was that kind of mc who wouldn't develop as a character for a 1000 chapter but instead he was the type who will face mack all the way till he die which just not my cup of tea. He was incredibly childish and the so-called past experiences of his was clearly that of the lower society. I don't see him surviving the upper rung with his attitude and past experiences. I only see him suppressing the upper rung with his knowledge making them forcefully comply not by his ability but only with his knowledge. Meaning he doesnt have his own ability. He can only use things that weren't his in the first place. And be shamelessly proud it. Major turn off Anways Plot and novel writing style is good and almost comparable to a pro translator quality. But still i simply dislike the mc. Seeing how he was. I dont see myself reading this in a long run. Plus the way how things are. you plagiarising real world works will put this novel the same fate as the novel i'm really a superstar not only will you gave us face smacking you will also face copyrights issues in the near future. TlDR EVERYTHING IS NICE EXCEPT FOR THE MC. CHANGE THE MC AND THIS NOVE WILL BE PERFECT

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