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DeliciousFoodEater
DeliciousFoodEaterLv66yr
2018-09-05 02:04

So this is just a wuick review for more chapters basically, but I'll just add my opinion and suggestions. So base on the chapters that I have read(until ch. 46), it is going pretty good. Pros 1. Great grammar - I can barely spot any mistakes in grammar until ch. 46 2. Realistic Characters - So the characters in this story has a certain depth to them and has some background of their own, in other words they're not like Passerby 1, 2, 3 or A, B, C 3. Good Writting Style - From what I have read, the author's writting is comparable to professional writtersa and is very to understand. 4. Simple but Clear Worldbuilding - The world building is decent, but still has flaws(ex. The other source of entertainment like games, sports, and etc. should be more advanced as the entertainment is industry is backwards right? So I think it should not be exactly the same). Overall it's ****** and easy to understand as it is just a bit in the future and the situation is the same except for the entertainment industry. Cons 1. The MC's First Life is Just Blank - Until ch. 46 I only noticed a few hints of details regarding his first life and although I think that is not really extremely important to the story, but it helps us to understand the MC and why he became like that. 2. The MC's Personality Might Annoy Some People - From an incident in the hotel manager underestimating him and he fights back by humiliating the manager(the standard plot). In this event he may seem annoying to people as some people see him as too petty(personally I think what he did isn't right, however it is the manager's fault for stepping on his dignity first and probably did it many times as well). Inially the MC just wated to treat his friends to a meal. 3. Some Character's Personality Might Seriously Annoy You - So some characters in this story, especially a CERTAIN FAMILY AND A CERTAIN SINGER'S personality would seriosly make you mad like I was UGHHHHHHH!!!=&=¥×#*@£. I was soooo fkin FRUSTRATED. Suggestions: - Tone down the annoyingness of some characters. - Don't put too much THOTS in the story. - No Harem PLEASE! - Try to stay orignal and don't stick too much on cliches. -MOAR CHAPTERS. - Don't be discouraged and stay awesome. P.S. If you actually read that then thanks and congratualtions I guess...

Rebirth of the Entertainment Giant

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241 Chs

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feysai
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great review and very thorough

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