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Review Detail of JKaiya in The Grand Duelist

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JKaiya
JKaiyaLv44yrJKaiya

I don't think my review will stay here long as this author most likely deletes reviews based on comments, quality, and boosted ratings... Anyways I think the novel had a really good start, however it quickly devolves into cliche plots, forced and flat relations, and dumb decisions. Since C5ish the novel went downhill. The grammar is good however the story quality has a noticable drop. I ended up dropping this novel at C19 due to that. It sort of felt like the author tried to force cliche and/or cringe things as an original which did not work... Overall, author I think you need to focus on developing your story flow/plot and characters. Lastly I love the cover, plus the updates look daily, though I can only guess since on phone so cant see history.

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The Grand Duelist

TheAdventurer

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TheAdventurer
TheAdventurerAuthorTheAdventurer

thx

JKaiya
JKaiyaLv4JKaiya

yay my review stayed lol

TheAdventurer:thx
TheAdventurer
TheAdventurerAuthorTheAdventurer

I dont delete reviews lol, this is a rebooted book, all reviews prior to the Grand Duelist arent a review for the grand duelist since this book was a different book before, specifically a release the witch fanfic.

JKaiya:yay my review stayed lol
OverlordAinz1
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Will you eventually start writing again or did you drop all your series?

TheAdventurer:I dont delete reviews lol, this is a rebooted book, all reviews prior to the Grand Duelist arent a review for the grand duelist since this book was a different book before, specifically a release the witch fanfic.