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Review Detail of ZALTARR_ABASSI in Trinity: omniverse traveling cat (hiatus)

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the story is great overall and fun to read but returning back to one piece his debuff is waaayyy too much. I mean instead of all those otherworld travelling he could have teleported to a more peaceful island in one piece and trained to a much more powerful self. If all those powers gained from other worlds only account to a level even lower than buggy, its better to jst train in one piece itself than wasting that much time. Another thing which weirds me out is he has a whole mansion and stuff in him WITH ley lines but he himself can't use magic. Since its in his soul wouldn't he be able to access that ambient magic. Anyway other than that it was a really great read, specially the HP arc is better than most hp fanfics.

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Trinity: omniverse traveling cat (hiatus)

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