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sampito_patoLv14yr
2020-08-30 05:19

hmm, first time in this do not pay much attention to the rating, this is my personal opinion of the novel. The story had a bright future, it could be said that the development of the story had a lot to offer. Well this is the summarized plot, a person who lives in the void after dying, reincarnates in an artificial body in the world of "one piece", so far so good, as the story progresses the character wakes up with a system which indicates a couple of missions, at the end tells him that he is too weak for that world and gives him the opportunity to reincarnate in another world to improve his strength. The story was going well, it begins to unfold in the world of volume 1, (parallel because it is not the same as the original, the story passes and comes to an end without emotion, so much damage that the MC suffered to finish everything in one second, Ok let's say that up to here well. Everyone thinks that it is time for me to return, but no, it turns out that he has to go to another world because they make him wait 3 more years, the other world is the same as the first, the story passes, it is he gets stronger, his statistics increase, ok the world ends and when he is going to receive the rewards it turns out that he invokes a being that sees his history and says, "Hey, you don't see worlds as reality, so I'll send you to another world and apart I will increase your age in 2 years because I want you to enjoy the women you have ". (Something important, if it is harem, but it is the type of harem that sex does not exist, wait 114 chapters for sex, but when there is a connection it is not by penetration of a "virile member" in the "vagina", the protagonist has animal inheritance, this one has a tail, the woman also has a tail, now 1 + 1 = 2, intercourse is carried out with the "tails", and they do it where the "tails" grow), when the guy passes the 3rd world that already gives chestnut to continue watching the series, finally it's time to go to the world of "one piece", but there is a surprise in the next chapter, the guy magically has 3 daughters and 2 women are pregnant, and there he lost all my points. Now you think this is it but nooooo, you have to see that when he enters the world of "one piece", the system tells him "Hey you have to forget about your 3 previous worlds, since your strength is only regular in the world of "one piece", so start to make yourself strong again. Well if someone likes this kind of story go ahead, but I unfortunately have to say that I lost 117 cap, that is, time of my life watching this to take a big disappointment. All this text is translated, since my English is terrible, but I needed to write this and not let people waste their time like me, if the person likes this type of novel, go ahead, but you are already warned: P

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