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Shakurr
ShakurrLv56yr
2018-10-10 08:46

The story is AMAZING i admit that, when your reading it, it feels as if ur standing right there while everything was happening. The only problem is that people who arent at the system used to see the weapons of sen and the others as stick.why are they seeing it like that

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Shmeb
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They are using guns against people who don't have the slightest idea of what a gun is.

Shakurr
ShakurrLv5

But why can't they see it as a normal gun but rather stick even though it kinda make sen and otherd look special

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