Review Detail of Jesus_McBeth in The Mech Touch

Story set in scifi universe where the logic of 80% of major setting elements is less reasonable than that of a fourth rate fantasy novel. But that can be taken in in stride. After all even if scientific knowledge is easily accessible not everyone has a paunchaune for it, much less being able to integrate it well like in say the legendary mechanic which keeps stuff both reasonable interesting and cool... While also having a great story - unlike this one - mc is unreasonable, suicidal etc. One might say oh its like a down to earth mc but considering he gets a crazy cheat yet uses it like a whimp and is still super suicidal etc, well thats annoying, which later transits into bouts of frustration and eventually downright rage and stifelement. I want to puke blood on behalf of the system~. Also at no point did i feel exited nor amused btw so even more aspects to work on.