Review Detail of FearlessWolf021 in Battle of Ascension

This was good for about 2 chapters. I started reading this again because I remembered it had a really good plot but I couldnt remember why i stopped. I figured it out. The main character, Randy, is a coward. He doesn’t have an ounce of sense or courage. The author seems to be trying to make some sort of traumatized newbie, but he created cowardice not inexperience. The difference between the two is that one is will to take chances while the other just isn’t. Not to mention the blatant stupidity the author injects him with. Its reminiscent of being on drugs with how stupid They make him. It had so much potential too. This author is excellent at world building and system development.