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Review Detail of Slav_Joe in Battle of Ascension

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Novel is trash even if it is the author’s first novel. Has horrible grammar. All woman are useless in this novel which irritates many people. Has weak character foundation.

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Battle of Ascension

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What is your definition woman is useless? I don't know the last chapter you read, but based on the WN site, your reading status is only at chapter 5 which mean there is no woman character introduced yet in the chapter 5 beside the mc's mom. Also about the grammar, I said it in the auxiliary volume, this was my first time writing a novel and English is not my native language, so I'm not used to write in English directly and used mtl to help me... As for now I already write directly in English and get better from the earlier, still many grammatical errors though. Also, about the novel is trash or not, is not your right to decide it, except you are a pro author or author who have many experience in writing. If you have created many amazing work, no need many as long as you have one amazing work (or more popular than mine) as an author then you can call my novel is trash but for now... you don't have the right. Also, based on your review, your grammar also horrible too. It weird for you who have horrible grammar complain about how horrible my grammar is... Anyway, thanks for the read as I know my novel doesn't deserve for 4 stars, but I don't think my novel also deserve for 1 star. Also, please don't call other hard work is trash easily as I already immune to this kinds words but it doesn't meant the same for other author, careful with your words in the future... my my my I should stop here and continues write for more chapters ^^... bye bye