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Dragonic_Dao
Dragonic_DaoLv45yr
2019-04-01 23:06

Good novel at the start ruined by the Author. Spoilers ahead Now this is gonna be pretty long so stop after this first paragraph if you can't be bothered. Well this novel has only one good point in my opinion and that was the beginning more specifically the word building after that everything was trash. Mc got dumber by the chapter the author did much more dumb **** that made this so much harder to read and his/her lack of good grammar didn't help either now I am no expert but at least I have basic grammar I think. Apart from that this is more to do with the Mc the first few hunting trips he only went out with 2 out of the 5 skills and his friends die oh buhoo he spent 5 days he could have used to get stronger and for revenge crying like a dumb a** now this isn't that bad some people are more emotional than others but come on man his "trauma" is so bad that he kills level 2 bunnies till he's level 12 and it worked out for him really because he got a title which upped his stats and level apart from that he gets the ai helper or what ever and instead of levelling it up bit by bit he decides to wait till he can mass level it. Oh and the funniest thing about that is although the Ai got more info or was allowed to share more info it got a personality while that isn't too bad at the chaos dragon cave it actually impeded him because it was annoyed at him and didn't want to tell him somethings now if it was a dire situation he would have been royally f*cked. Now also this guy has a hidden stat that has a recharge time which is so long it's stupid and he forgets to deactivate and or activate it and the Ai tell him it knows how to make him stronger well I don't know about you but if I had such a stat I would wish for some op monsters to fight be weakened and than be so weak that I can kill them for mass levelling but lucky him it seems the Ai had another way because plot demanded it and it was to get a super special bloodline now man why would you add bloodlines in this like seriously it may just be my preference but when it is battle of ascension and probably humanity has to "ascend" shouldn't they mostly being doing it by them selves and not with help from the other species I mean the vibe I was getting off it was at a point they would have to fight the other races like demons devils etc and if it goes this route if they fight dragons then it doesn't even make sense anymore in my opinion but this bit really is like Is aid my opinion. A part from this guy mistakes this op bloodline for some semi decent potion leave luck on meets love interest that is unlikeable and irritating and the situation end up in one of the only ways that a girl could possibly get close enough to him a see that shrivel of a thing that was good about him with out immediately running a way and trying to forget about him. Also one of the most infuriating things is this guy sells a legendary saber just because he can't use it none of his family can and he wants to open his mothers restaurant. Now I don't know about you but when you're looking for allies or think you are gonna look for allies (this refers to his future plan) you should find a strong saber user and give he/she the saber GOD F*CKING D*AMN IT! Terrible novel good world building at the start ruined by the AUTHOR not the Mc because he created this **** fest.

Battle of Ascension

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CrazyBanana
CrazyBananaLv3

I like the plot but the mc, i dont like him at all. He has the intelligence of an ant and doesnt have a centimeter of balls. He forgets to turn on his luck stat and also turn it off. He has an AI guide and he doesnt use her.

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Tyler89558
Tyler89558Lv5

To describe this novel I believe it would be accurate to say it's the equivalent of eating a frozen meal from the dollar store long after it has passed its expiration date. The MC has less intelligence than an ant and balls smaller than a hydrogen atom, want a little more detail on these descriptions? He hunted level 1 rabbits until he reached level 14, he didn't use his AI and failed to properly utilize his advantages by either forgetting to activate or deactivate said advantages. To top it all off while he was leveling his AI helper, instead of leveling her up as he leveled up he felt he needed to wait until he could just mass level it up to where he wants it. That's just the tip of the iceberg as well. Somehow he meets a woman who magically falls in love with him after hearing that he literally hunted rabbits for the entirety of his existence, he let his mother name his guild some completely idiotic name, and he is basically on the hit list of every powerful organization except for the strictly neutral organizations like merchants or town guards. He's essentially protected by plot armor the whole way through and the villains are so one dimensional that you can almost predict the entire story line. Considering there are other free novels which are far better than this, like there are better options for getting food than buying some television dinner from the dollar store, this novel probably isn't worth your time.

6yr
igniziouz
igniziouzLv14

It was going so well, the story seemed serious, progress of MC was steady and then BHAM there comes a princess of a large clan that now hate our mc and focus shift from struggling in this new cruel world to how the clumsy attempts of MC talking to the princess. You completely changed the setting of the novel with that decision.

6yr
Blizt
BliztLv13

Well honestly it's pretty good to read, just fix about the grammar and It's done, i'm Indonesian and support this novel, and one more is to fix the update posts schedule not like beetwen 3-8 pm(8gmt)

6yr
Keyweilder
KeyweilderLv6

Good story so far, looking forward to the MC leveling up and the evolution of the world throughout the story! I like his family and am looking forward to their restaurant:p

6yr
Fimbultyr
FimbultyrLv10

I hate the MC. He is the king of retards and it is really frustrating to read this. I like the idea of the novel but the author ruined it with such a stupid, moronic and retarded MC

6yr
MiraLuka
MiraLukaLv6

What is this??....... Rather read the novel, i think i like to read the comments they posting about the MC in each chapter.,,, (-_-). The comments are more interesting than the story and the blockhead MC... (>_<).

6yr
Nydre
NydreLv13

Had potential. The concept was good but it was all ruined by the authors horrible grammar. Main characters iq is borderline 0, easily manipulated, vague character, has the memory of a rock, and his actions make no sense. Basically, the mc nobody likes. His parents really care about him to the point of aging 10 years in a day, yet the next day they let him marry some random girl because shes pretty, no opposition at all. Also he becomes a wuxia character that offends anyone because of a girl he just met, and goes and offends one of the biggest families there, all mid chapter. And then, since shes the boss of the house on her first day there, he has to sleep on the floor of his own room. Overall, a novel that could've been good.

6yr
Slav_Joe
Slav_JoeLv11

Reveal spoiler

6yr
PsiKo
PsiKoLv5

I have no idea how this has 4 stars. The writing quality (style, grammar) etc. is poor and the MC and all the other characters are just retarded.

6yr
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