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Eturion
EturionLv56yr
2018-08-26 06:16

This story has a great amount of plot-holes and a mc with brain problems. To add to that the grammar is horrific and the author switches between perspectives(I/He). I personally can not see why this story has a rating with over 4 stars. Just going back and rereading/rewriting could improve the story imo, as the basic premise is quite decent.

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HotIce
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maybe you should read the brief introduction first before read the real chapter, about the perspective I changed it to (He/the third person's respective) in later chapter as you only read it until chapter 7. Anyway thanks for the read, also most reviews that gave me above 4 stars were the reviewers who could bear with my mistake in earlier chapter as I am improving in later chapter(I mean the mc and the story, the grammar? I will try hard to fix the grammar or hire proofreader later when I getting paid ^^). About the mc, its character development, the mc changed as the story goes further ^^ Once more, thanks for the read. Thanks for not give a 1* rating, this mean you give me (An Amateur author) a chance to keep improving ^^

Lord1994
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Plot amour lol

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