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krnegi
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This story is written in a slice of life manner & is pretty good... not the best out there, but it is well written... I would suggest that things progress faster & that the characters have more personality (Review is based on ch.1-78 only, as I paused reading due 2 the story getting a Lil slow)

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Oh. My. Fate?!

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krnegi
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Also... in case you haven't read them, I would like to recommend the following stories for basic inspiration... I think it might help with how much progress & detail is necessary vs when the story is being dragged out... Seven Unfortunate Lifetimes, All Thanks to a Single Moment of Impulse Sansheng, Wangchuan Wu Shang Of course the stories are different in genres, and yours is more lighthearted (+BL :p)... Im not sure when I'll pick it up, but i look forward to reading this another time

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Thanks for your review! I actually read the second story you recommended and liked it. The first one rings a bell, too, but I can't really remember if I've actually read it or not. I'll probably go and check it out again 😁 About OMF being a little slow sometimes, it's true. I'm going to cut it a bit when I find the time to edit the whole thing. That won't be in the near future, though, since I'm more concentrating on getting the next chapters out atm 😊

krnegi:Also... in case you haven't read them, I would like to recommend the following stories for basic inspiration... I think it might help with how much progress & detail is necessary vs when the story is being dragged out... Seven Unfortunate Lifetimes, All Thanks to a Single Moment of Impulse Sansheng, Wangchuan Wu Shang Of course the stories are different in genres, and yours is more lighthearted (+BL :p)... Im not sure when I'll pick it up, but i look forward to reading this another time