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Lupaleco
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2018-06-19 11:26

I really recommend this novel. I've had read only 30 chapters, but I think that the amount is enough to say with a 99,9% certainity that this is a really, REALLY GOOD READ. Setting aside the fact that the plot is a gust of fresh air, I must say that our heroine is higly credible. She does what she can do, and ask for help when the situation needs it. She's overpowered, but not in a bad sense; besides, she didn't have to worry about political schemes so far. The other personages are unique and easygoing. This is currently a lighthearted novel, with specs of sílice of life (i hope muy life were like this) and comedy. The better? IT HAS A LOT OF POTENTIAL, AND A GREAT AUTHOR THAT CAN MAKE IT SHINE Finally, the updates aren't fast nor slow. But since this is so good, the wait feels like torture and it worth it.

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