Review Detail of glowingreverie in Book of Authors

read out of curiosity, but kinda really bad advice. it's true that this type of writing can capture the attention of readers, but it's usually not the type of attention one would want. The suggestions on what to do with the MC would make MC far to Mary/Gary Sue, which isn't very pleasant to read. It also holes up and coming writers into holes and bad habits, not allowing them to explore while they're still growing. Just don't recommend following the advice listed, that's all.