Review Detail of KAI0 in Blue Star Cultivator
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Sorry to say that this book isn't great. I like the Gravity/Time concepts, but the MC is lame, the english isn't good(though I've seen worse), and there are a bad mix of cliches in there. It's ok to have some cliche parts, but the author's usage of plot points cultivation levels didn't impress me. That being said, it's admirable that the author took the time and effort to do this and I hope that he/she continues to improve themselves and write better works. Thanks!
Blue Star Cultivator
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The MC doesn't seem to have any sort of character(irrational decisions) and doesn't match the cool lookin' guy on the cover of the novel. I think improving the MC and improving the english would be able to bring this novel from 2 start to even 4 start if done well enough. Author, please try. Thanks!
KAI0:The MC doesn't seem to have any sort of character(irrational decisions) and doesn't match the cool lookin' guy on the cover of the novel. I think improving the MC and improving the english would be able to bring this novel from 2 start to even 4 start if done well enough. Author, please try. Thanks!