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brendorcLv116yr
2019-01-05 14:12

Terrible plot! Keeps getting worse! There is too much negativity in this story. I give this author below 30% ranking in writing skills & story development. Reason being that this story does not grow or mature but just keeps revolving around ugly midunderstandings & rape plots. Why would you, author have such a fascination & fixation on rape? Are novels/stories not meant to be tools through which morality is advanced & encouraged? Why keep harping on immoral themes? What lessons are you advancing & imparting? Don't you realise even from the comments left, that this is a terrible terrible plot?

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Okay, so first and foremost I will not recommend this story to anyone. The reasons are: 1. The female lead is very dumb, idiot, stupid in her 2 lifetimes. She already died once because of the villains schemes and was given another chance at life. However, she still acts stupidly by letting the villains do their thing and she does not act accordingly. Like for example, she should have been more wiser now because of those past experiences. There were already a lot of chapters released but she is still very stupid. 2. It was mentioned that she tried learning martial arts but she does not know how to defend herself. Especially when she was attempted of rape or when she was attacked by other paid women. Wow! She keeps acting pitiful to gain symphaty from the readers then acts imbecile again just by telling her that in her previous lifetime blah, blah, blah (maybe she deserves to die so that this story will not happen. I really don't understand why she was still reincarnated) . 3. Her husband is opening up himself to her but she keeps misjudging him. 4. She already know that the villains are trying to kill her but she does not think of the circumstances that she was in danger that she was being targeted. All she said was, someone was after her life. GEEZ! Didn't you die because of that? WHERE IS YOUR BRAIN? 5. She does not want her husband to think bad about her but she does things that make him misinterpret AND DOES NOT TELL HER HUSBAND WHAT IS HAPPENING TO HER! Especially when she was cornered or was in danger. BOBO MASYADO!!!!!

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