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Alex_Grant
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2018-05-04 07:29

It's a good story of fantasy apocalypse. The world is transformed into an RPG and the MC does not have the powers of protagonist, only managed to select a basic class. The MC follows the 'protagonist' in order to survive The story is quick, little explained, but it is easy to understand why this, the story is in the first person, and portrays how the MC feels and from what I understand he feels that everything is happening too fast. Modern life ends and turns into an RPG, MC still has not had time to think what's really going on, still does not understand that his family may have died, ... I hope this story continues and the characters gain more personality. I recommend.

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Alex_Grant
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google translate

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SmallFries
SmallFriesAuthor

Thanks for reading, and thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely work on your suggestions. =D

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Alex_Grant
Alex_GrantLv5

When I put 'google translate' is that my comments are made on it. Not that the story (which is original) has been translated on the website. Just solving misunderstandings before they happen.

SmallFries:Thanks for reading, and thank you for the feedback. I'll definitely work on your suggestions. =D
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89KXY
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Not exactly sure about the Chapter 1: Prologue thing, but the writing is good. Hope author keeps on going with update. oijadsoifjsoaidfoijadsoifjsoaidfoijadsoifjsoaidfoijadsoifjsoaidf

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AriHarr
AriHarrLv4

I agree with Alex above. Like the idea but kinda fast paced. The chapsters are kinda short too. The characters can't be fully shown with few words.

6yr
hikigayaaaa
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Reveal spoiler

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gee_ringdomstories
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to check whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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fencer3001
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Please!!! More updates!!! I enjoyed the writing style and the premise. A member who isn't covered in plot armor leeching off someone who obviously is, and the story doesn't take itself seriously. Good Job! The comedy is awesome as well.

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