Fuck, the grammar and the plot idea is so good but the Author just couldn’t do **** with it, it feels like author paid someone for the ideaand tried to write it himself The character development is utter trash, it took mc 17ch to realize he was wasting his 2nd life while also being plain retarded when he did The story development is decent, not good but not bad, the idea is good and the grammar is good but the writing doesn’t flow whatsoever and author makes the dumbest mistskes like he wants more detail than plot in his chapter and all that disrupts the flow The world is still not introduced but so far it’s bad, plain bad, his parents survived the strongest tribulation but they’re royals ina backwater kingdom that’s merely a large village and also happens to have high grade cultivation techniques that a prestigues sect don’t On top of all this, there’s 17ch out after 1year Overall rating would be: Writing 3/5 Story 2/5 World 2/5 Characters 2/5 barely Update schedule 0/5 not worth following, read and then remove from library or forget about it
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