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KingFischer
KingFischerLv115yr
2019-03-18 19:15

This is the most impressive webnobel i have ever read, among the few gems found in qidian and espescially original, this would be the diamond, already polished, among them. If i had to complain, id say there were a few grammatical errors, but there are less errors than there are chapters, so i don't think it detracts from the experience. And what a crazy experience, the best case of "show don't tell" i've seen in all of qidian. Please keep writing! I want more...

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Hyowha
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EGOTISTICAL438
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π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ˆπ“‰π‘œπ“‡π“Ž π’Ύπ“ˆ π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž 𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒢𝓉𝒽𝓉𝒢𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒢𝓃𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“Œπ’Άπ“Ž 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π’½π‘œπ“‡ π’Έπ‘œπ“ƒπ“‹π‘’π“Žπ“ˆ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’»π‘’π‘’π“π’Ύπ“ƒπ‘”π“ˆ π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π’Έπ’½π’Άπ“‡π’Άπ’Έπ“‰π‘’π“‡π“ˆ 𝒢𝓇𝑒 π“ˆπ‘œ π“‡π‘’π’Άπ“π’Ύπ“ˆπ“‰π’Ύπ’Έ 𝓉𝒽𝒢𝓉 𝐼 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒢𝓁𝓁 π‘œπ’» 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 π‘’π“‚π‘œπ“‰π’Ύπ‘œπ“ƒπ“ˆ , 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝓅𝒢𝒾𝓃, 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 π’½π“Šπ“‡π“‰, 𝐼 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒸𝒢𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒢𝓁𝓁 π‘œπ’» 𝒾𝓉, π“Œπ’½π’Ύπ’Έπ’½ π’Ύπ“ˆ π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž 𝒢𝓂𝒢𝓏𝒾𝓃𝑔 π“‰π‘œ 𝓉𝒽𝑒 π“…π‘œπ’Ύπ“ƒπ“‰ π“Œπ’½π‘’π“‡π‘’ 𝐼 𝒽𝒢𝓋𝑒 π“ƒπ‘œ π“Œπ‘œπ“‡π’Ήπ“ˆ π“‰π‘œ π’Ήπ‘’π“ˆπ’Έπ“‡π’Ύπ’·π‘’ 𝒾𝓉. π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ˆπ“‰π‘œπ“‡π“Ž π’Ήπ‘œπ‘’π“ˆ π“ƒπ‘œπ“‰ 𝓁𝒾𝓋𝑒 π“Šπ“… π“‰π‘œ 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ 𝓇𝒢𝓃𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔, 𝒾𝓉 π’Άπ’·π“ˆπ‘œπ“π“Šπ“‰π‘’π“π“Ž π’Ύπ“ˆ 𝒢 5 π“ƒπ‘œπ“‰ 𝒢 4 π“…π‘œπ’Ύπ“ƒπ“‰ π“Œπ’½π’Άπ“‰π‘’π“‹π‘’π“‡. π’―π’½π’Ύπ“ˆ π“ƒπ‘œπ“‹π‘’π“ π’Ήπ‘’π“ˆπ‘’π“‡π“‹π‘’π“ˆ 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝒢𝓃𝒹 𝒾𝓉 π“ƒπ‘’π‘’π’Ήπ“ˆ π“‚π‘œπ“‡π‘’ π“…π‘’π‘œπ“…π“π‘’ π“‰π‘œ 𝒢𝓅𝓅𝓇𝑒𝒸𝒾𝒢𝓉𝑒 𝒾𝓉'π“ˆ π’·π‘’π’Άπ“Šπ“‰π“Ž.

krysth
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First of all, lemme get with the storytelling. The style reminds me of those eerie Brothers Grimm stories I used to read back in High School back when I found out that classic tales actually have a darker original. They give off a similar vibe and I'm really liking it. Though the story progress is a tad bit slow compared to the other stories found on this site, I DO LOVE THE SLOW BURN. In fact, this pace doesn't actually feel all that slow to me. It's actually pretty neat that we get to know more about our MC from their every interaction with other characters. Think of it like a teabag. You don't rush to drink it, you have to let it soak for a bit. MC's thought processes are well planned out and how he gives a peek of the psycho in everyone. I also love the back and forth arguments he has with the original Agnes. You could see that they're learning a bit from each other with every small fight or discussion they have. Though I doubt they'll get to trusting each other fully *wink* AH! Almost forgot, I also appreciate the unique magic system! The whole philosophy thing is genius, not only do you get to play around with a new system (a breath of fresh air from the norm of this site) you also take a shot at building the world while you're at it. Every kingdom/ruler's philosophy tells a bit about the world and it paints a sort of "backdrop" where this story can grow onto. I could talk about it more but it's like 12am and my brain's shutting off from the medication I'm taking so I'll cut it short. The book is just really really swell and I'm thankful for author Hyo's hardwork and efforts to bring this lovely and twisted story to us readers.

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