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KingFischerLv115yr
2019-03-18 11:15

This is the most impressive webnobel i have ever read, among the few gems found in qidian and espescially original, this would be the diamond, already polished, among them. If i had to complain, id say there were a few grammatical errors, but there are less errors than there are chapters, so i don't think it detracts from the experience. And what a crazy experience, the best case of "show don't tell" i've seen in all of qidian. Please keep writing! I want more...

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EGOTISTICAL438Lv6

𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓈𝓉𝑜𝓇𝓎 𝒾𝓈 𝒶𝒷𝓈𝑜𝓁𝓊𝓉𝑒𝓁𝓎 𝒷𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒽𝓉𝒶𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓌𝒶𝓎 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒶𝓊𝓉𝒽𝑜𝓇 𝒸𝑜𝓃𝓋𝑒𝓎𝓈 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁𝒾𝓃𝑔𝓈 𝑜𝒻 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝒸𝒽𝒶𝓇𝒶𝒸𝓉𝑒𝓇𝓈 𝒶𝓇𝑒 𝓈𝑜 𝓇𝑒𝒶𝓁𝒾𝓈𝓉𝒾𝒸 𝓉𝒽𝒶𝓉 𝐼 𝒸𝒶𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝑒𝓂𝑜𝓉𝒾𝑜𝓃𝓈 , 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝓅𝒶𝒾𝓃, 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝒾𝓇 𝒽𝓊𝓇𝓉, 𝐼 𝒸𝒶𝓃 𝒸𝒶𝓃 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝒶𝓁𝓁 𝑜𝒻 𝒾𝓉, 𝓌𝒽𝒾𝒸𝒽 𝒾𝓈 𝒶𝒷𝓈𝑜𝓁𝓊𝓉𝑒𝓁𝓎 𝒶𝓂𝒶𝓏𝒾𝓃𝑔 𝓉𝑜 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓅𝑜𝒾𝓃𝓉 𝓌𝒽𝑒𝓇𝑒 𝐼 𝒽𝒶𝓋𝑒 𝓃𝑜 𝓌𝑜𝓇𝒹𝓈 𝓉𝑜 𝒹𝑒𝓈𝒸𝓇𝒾𝒷𝑒 𝒾𝓉. 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓈𝓉𝑜𝓇𝓎 𝒹𝑜𝑒𝓈 𝓃𝑜𝓉 𝓁𝒾𝓋𝑒 𝓊𝓅 𝓉𝑜 𝒾𝓉'𝓈 𝓇𝒶𝓃𝓀𝒾𝓃𝑔, 𝒾𝓉 𝒶𝒷𝓈𝑜𝓁𝓊𝓉𝑒𝓁𝓎 𝒾𝓈 𝒶 5 𝓃𝑜𝓉 𝒶 4 𝓅𝑜𝒾𝓃𝓉 𝓌𝒽𝒶𝓉𝑒𝓋𝑒𝓇. 𝒯𝒽𝒾𝓈 𝓃𝑜𝓋𝑒𝓁 𝒹𝑒𝓈𝑒𝓇𝓋𝑒𝓈 𝒷𝑒𝓉𝓉𝑒𝓇 𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒾𝓉 𝓃𝑒𝑒𝒹𝓈 𝓂𝑜𝓇𝑒 𝓅𝑒𝑜𝓅𝓁𝑒 𝓉𝑜 𝒶𝓅𝓅𝓇𝑒𝒸𝒾𝒶𝓉𝑒 𝒾𝓉'𝓈 𝒷𝑒𝒶𝓊𝓉𝓎.

krysthLv5

First of all, lemme get with the storytelling. The style reminds me of those eerie Brothers Grimm stories I used to read back in High School back when I found out that classic tales actually have a darker original. They give off a similar vibe and I'm really liking it. Though the story progress is a tad bit slow compared to the other stories found on this site, I DO LOVE THE SLOW BURN. In fact, this pace doesn't actually feel all that slow to me. It's actually pretty neat that we get to know more about our MC from their every interaction with other characters. Think of it like a teabag. You don't rush to drink it, you have to let it soak for a bit. MC's thought processes are well planned out and how he gives a peek of the psycho in everyone. I also love the back and forth arguments he has with the original Agnes. You could see that they're learning a bit from each other with every small fight or discussion they have. Though I doubt they'll get to trusting each other fully *wink* AH! Almost forgot, I also appreciate the unique magic system! The whole philosophy thing is genius, not only do you get to play around with a new system (a breath of fresh air from the norm of this site) you also take a shot at building the world while you're at it. Every kingdom/ruler's philosophy tells a bit about the world and it paints a sort of "backdrop" where this story can grow onto. I could talk about it more but it's like 12am and my brain's shutting off from the medication I'm taking so I'll cut it short. The book is just really really swell and I'm thankful for author Hyo's hardwork and efforts to bring this lovely and twisted story to us readers.

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