This is the most impressive webnobel i have ever read, among the few gems found in qidian and espescially original, this would be the diamond, already polished, among them. If i had to complain, id say there were a few grammatical errors, but there are less errors than there are chapters, so i don't think it detracts from the experience. And what a crazy experience, the best case of "show don't tell" i've seen in all of qidian. Please keep writing! I want more...
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