Review Detail of pingulrosalie in Beneath the Embroidered Brocade

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pingulrosalieLv44yrpingulrosalie

The story is flat. The flow of it is slow that will make you sleep in boredom. The characters were cool but the long naration of the story makes them dull. I hope the author can do something about this. I tried to read to its last updated chapter hoping that the story will spike but I was dissapointed.

Beneath the Embroidered Brocade

littleredblossom

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littleredblossomAuthorlittleredblossom

Thanks for the feedback, though I would like to point out that slow paced is one of the tags in the novel, which brings me to the question, do the readers see the tags because I have tried looking at this page logged off of my account and there are no tags that show up in the tag section.

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr

pingulrosalieLv4pingulrosalie

I don't see slow pace on the tag section... Hmn.... Why is that?

4yr