Review Detail of Lazuli_Madden in Beneath the Embroidered Brocade

What needs to be cleared up? There are so many comments saying that it's confusing, is there anything specific? I need some feedback, so I can better my writing exercises.

Well im not really sure what the main plot is. And why is that stuff about the imperial harem and the executed family important. It would be amazing if we actually get to know what the plot is.

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Well, there's this plot of mystery that lingers around, but I can tell you, the matters of the imperial harem will become important, a few volumes later, if I ever get that far at all and decide not to drop the novel, but everything does end up revealing itself. I think this is one of those novels that are better off being released when finished. Thank you for your feedback!