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Lazuli_Madden
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2019-04-12 22:10

I love xue soooooooooooo much. She is a cold person and a total badass! A little confused by the stories development like wtf is happening. Is there a plot like ????????

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littleredblossom
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What needs to be cleared up? There are so many comments saying that it's confusing, is there anything specific? I need some feedback, so I can better my writing exercises.

Lazuli_Madden
Lazuli_MaddenLv4

Well im not really sure what the main plot is. And why is that stuff about the imperial harem and the executed family important. It would be amazing if we actually get to know what the plot is.

Lazuli_Madden
Lazuli_MaddenLv4

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Lazuli_Madden:Well im not really sure what the main plot is. And why is that stuff about the imperial harem and the executed family important. It would be amazing if we actually get to know what the plot is.
Lazuli_Madden
Lazuli_MaddenLv4

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littleredblossom:What needs to be cleared up? There are so many comments saying that it's confusing, is there anything specific? I need some feedback, so I can better my writing exercises.
littleredblossom
littleredblossomAuthor

Well, there's this plot of mystery that lingers around, but I can tell you, the matters of the imperial harem will become important, a few volumes later, if I ever get that far at all and decide not to drop the novel, but everything does end up revealing itself. I think this is one of those novels that are better off being released when finished. Thank you for your feedback!

Lazuli_Madden:Well im not really sure what the main plot is. And why is that stuff about the imperial harem and the executed family important. It would be amazing if we actually get to know what the plot is.
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