Item: The Invincible Hero
Rating: 4.8
Author: Timestronaut

TimestronautLv46yr

2018-06-26 05:32

This book continues to surprise. I thought I knew who Lorne was on the 3rd world and was wrong. But that’s why I like the book - it keeps you on your toes and makes you think. The Incredible Hero also has characters I care about and good story arcs. However I would like to see him stay around longer to develop a relationship with the one he loves.

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