Review Detail of Trako in Truly Unfair Justice

Lured by the cover and your nickname - I smelled a kindred loli-loving spirit - so I came here to check it out. Surprise! The novel is written with the correct kind of English that I like, not the hard to read broken stuff that has to be deciphered first and put through grammar check before reading, just for this alone you gained my approval and I started reading. The beginning chapters were too short, they should be at least 2k words each and unfortunately ended in a flash, but they were easy to read. As for the story itself, looks good. I gave you a full score to encourage its further development. I will be back later when there will be enough content to allow me a few good hours of reading. Let's see if then your story will deserve a full five-star review without the additional encouragement boost, (without it I would give you ~4).