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Delarosa61
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2018-08-03 03:40

I have enjoyed this story and I'm happy that you did finished it. I did however think that the end was to rushed. The relationship between the mc and his girlfriend could have been done in a chapter or two not just the couple of lines you gave it. Once again I did enjoy this novel and will read another if you write again.

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Well, Hello Everyone This Time I'll be Selfish and rate a perfect 5 Star for the novel. I tied that Until now all of Review that I Wrote would be fair and properly rated that others can't say anything. So What's the reason for this 5 Rate? The Answer is very easy to say. It's because that we as reader didn't treat this novel and its Author Properly till now. Story has a fairy good spelling and Grammar writing and we can easily see that the Author tried in each chapter to be perfectly Ready and good in every way. Character Design also was done pretty good and we see different personalty and characters with their own originality. It's almost like some of the translated novels that we can see proper characters and world background, this is a side the very few of the Original novels have in them. and story progress in a very good way and we can see clearly that compare to first chapters of the novels story is becoming better and better Specially ever since MC entered the Academy. Well System and OP for me is a good thing though now we can see this factors in every Novels so this can't be a problem, in this novel MC although has a System but is a very hardworking one and i have a favorable impression of him. So what is that i'm angry about it ? The novel's Ranking !!??? Why is that this novels with the stable Updated chapters and a rather good story-line has no Ranking? Readers at least try to read the novel to this chapter and after that decide to read it or not. Thanks again Everybody and the Author

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