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Review Detail of TriArc in Spirit Cultivation

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TriArc
TriArcLv133yrTriArc

Story started out interesting and detailed. Later, I felt the quality of the novel and character development dropped. It’s one thing if a MC were to acknowledge himself as straight-up ruthless or have a good reason for being so, but the MC acts like a hypocrite... I noticed lots of discrepancies between the MC’s supposedly good karma/intentions/nature and his recent illogical/pointless/horrible actions. For example, the MC proclaims not wanting to steal from other innocent cultivators like a bandit. Shortly after, his group decides to use a couple dozen innocent cultivators as fodder against a supposedly “strong” spider monster; his group even deliberately blocks the exit, murders the innocents (for whatever justified reason that my logical brain is unable to fathom) as the innocents attempt to escape, or simply watch the innocents die to the spider while they beg the MC to let them go. The MC even avoids culpability in the matter by blaming the spider while somehow having the nerve to act justified and righteous. Soon, I started cringing and feeling a little disgusted when trying to read chapters. Things just don’t add up or flow.

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Spirit Cultivation

Piokilek

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TriArc
TriArcLv13TriArc

Anyways, rant’s over! I just felt bothered by the sudden changes in direction the story/characters were taking around ch 65. They seemed a bit out of place to me. Think I will take a break from this novel, and maybe pick it up sometime in the future. Seeing the number of chapters ahead and the high ratings, I hope this story gets better...

Piokilek
PiokilekAuthorPiokilek

It gets better just as I got better as a writer.

TriArc:Anyways, rant’s over! I just felt bothered by the sudden changes in direction the story/characters were taking around ch 65. They seemed a bit out of place to me. Think I will take a break from this novel, and maybe pick it up sometime in the future. Seeing the number of chapters ahead and the high ratings, I hope this story gets better...
YourMaster
YourMasterLv3YourMaster

Yeah, the inconsistent morals of MC is one of the main reasons why I dropped it. And also the fact that MC has no talent or any positive qualities and just relies on his cheats. Maybe I'll try to read it again later though, because there are just not enough decent harem novels where the girls actually has any sort of romance and *** with MC while not being completely one-dimensional.