Review Detail of KAI0 in Technomancer: Genesis

Great Job! Loved the story and the fact that the reincarnation has a major effect on the protagonist's current life, unlike many novels which just forget about the knowledge and influence from a person's previous life. I understand how this story doesn't aim at comedy, but there are a few scenes which could be amusing and I feel they should be written in a more light-hearted and expressive way to give the reader that little smile. The story does have many long paragraphs explaining thoughts and other info to the reader(which many readers like), but I feel that conveying a bit more of this knowledge through dialogue between characters would be great (and by dialogue I don't mean one person explaining things to the protagonist but a genuine back and forth between two characters). Breaking the largest paragraphs into smaller ones would also make the story easier on the eyes while reading as its easy to lose track where you are in a big para and losing your flow of reading takes away from the excitement of the story. I am super excited for what's to come from this book as the idea has great potential, and I hope to see new and innovative ways in which the 'Technomancing' applies the pre-existing magical concepts in the world.