Item: Ancient Cultivator in Modern World
Rating: 2.6
Author: Dosithee

DositheeLv56yr

2018-07-12 04:25

First off, thank you author for sharing your work. I think the world you built is pretty interesting and the premise is as well. Unfortunately the characters are super thin especially the female lead. The writing quality is mediocre as well. The biggest issue however, is the female lead and her interactions with mc. Without developing a real relationship or at least a believable one, she becomes an integral part of his life and plot. Her character and mc’s reactions to her make me cringe. This story would be a 3.5 or 4 if she was removed.

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