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nikostar
nikostarAuthor6yr
2018-04-18 01:56

Hello guys, I am the author of this novel. I apologise in advance... I am an amateur and this is the first time I am attempting to write. I just hope you will enjoy the story... there's some info dump at the beginning... but I promise to stop that soon... As for release rate... that will be according to my inspiration ^^

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SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

Don’t worry about it your doing great and I appreciate it. It’s hard to juggle life and write a novel at the same time. Do you and remember to stay healthy.

Beyond_Namez
Beyond_NamezLv11

It's not that hard to juggle life and write a chapter of a novel daily. One chapter or do it on a special day. Although I don't know if he does them daily. You're making it seem that making novels is harder than it has to be or is xD. But ok.

SerBlueom:Don’t worry about it your doing great and I appreciate it. It’s hard to juggle life and write a novel at the same time. Do you and remember to stay healthy.
ScarletBloodMoon
ScarletBloodMoonLv12

How to write a novel?

nikostar
nikostarAuthor

At the top of the page, there's an option "Create", it's only for pc

ScarletBloodMoon:How to write a novel?
SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

Didn’t mean anything by it just wanted to show support. Sorry if I made it seem like that.

Beyond_Namez:It's not that hard to juggle life and write a chapter of a novel daily. One chapter or do it on a special day. Although I don't know if he does them daily. You're making it seem that making novels is harder than it has to be or is xD. But ok.
Amin
AminLv15

The story line is very interesting and i like the characters progress..keep it up.. Cannot wait for more..

WickedQueen2
WickedQueen2Lv14

I am really enjoying it and I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up with the good work.

BloodHeaven
BloodHeavenLv5

I would like to ask you a question. You wrote that the commander know that Players can get a bit stronger by killing enemies, but don’t know about levels, but when MC got to level 10 they know about levels. I just want to ask if it’s a error or just me misinterpreting. By the way I love your novel!

nikostar
nikostarAuthor

ehhh I think I said that the normal militia are not aware that Li Wei can get stronger by killing enemies but the commander knew about it. As for levels I don't think I mentioned him not knowing about them. Might be wrong, I'll check later

BloodHeaven:I would like to ask you a question. You wrote that the commander know that Players can get a bit stronger by killing enemies, but don’t know about levels, but when MC got to level 10 they know about levels. I just want to ask if it’s a error or just me misinterpreting. By the way I love your novel!
BloodHeaven
BloodHeavenLv5

Ok, but to let you know what meant is in chapter 14 and the end of chapter 19

nikostar
nikostarAuthor

I checked it out... I did not clearly explained but basically what I mean is both players and NPCs have levels but NPCs level up differently while players level up by killing... mb I'll revise the chapter later

BloodHeaven:Ok, but to let you know what meant is in chapter 14 and the end of chapter 19
BloodHeaven
BloodHeavenLv5

Ahh I understand and sorry for the trouble

nikostar:I checked it out... I did not clearly explained but basically what I mean is both players and NPCs have levels but NPCs level up differently while players level up by killing... mb I'll revise the chapter later
nikostar
nikostarAuthor

Thx for letting me know, don't hesitate to criticise, it helps improve the future chapters ! :)

BloodHeaven:Ahh I understand and sorry for the trouble
NightHunter
NightHunterLv14

This Man.... Has Great potential

DevilWillCry
DevilWillCryLv4

What did 2050 did to you author guy, why bully it

Benjamin_Green
Benjamin_GreenLv15

Agreed a healthy author equals happy readers

SerBlueom:Don’t worry about it your doing great and I appreciate it. It’s hard to juggle life and write a novel at the same time. Do you and remember to stay healthy.
SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

Heck yeah someone with positive outlooks

Benjamin_Green:Agreed a healthy author equals happy readers
WorldsEnemy
WorldsEnemyLv5

I hope you develop Dungeon of Madness rather than this one. The dungeon master story is much more interesting.

nikostar
nikostarAuthor

The reason it's more interesting is precisely because I am taking much more time to plan the story! If I start posting daily, quality will drop. Also, I am using this novel more as a test and trying different things to see which fits my style more ^^

WorldsEnemy:I hope you develop Dungeon of Madness rather than this one. The dungeon master story is much more interesting.
Chaotic_Winter
Chaotic_WinterLv13

Harem?

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