Review Detail of writegood in The Saiyan in marvel

Not my cup of tea. It reads to me like (what I'd describe as) First Draft work. I find a lot of fanfiction are just posted with minimal editing and with the story not fully fleshed out. I rarely if ever find a story where it is clear the author has gone through some sort of writing methodology. Like write a first draft that is simply vomiting all your ideas and bunnies out onto paper (or wherever you write). A second draft that is the product of reviewing your first draft, figuring out the story you want to tell, figuring out how you want to develop your characters, figuring out your plot, figuring out the best way to do world building, doing some outlining if you need to, and finally writing it (all that being just during the second draft phase). Then after repeating the second phase as many times as needed, you get some beta readers/private readers to give you input on plot, world building, characterisation, and etc. Then do some revisions. Repeat some phases. Add new phases if you find it nessecary. Do more revisions. Cut things up. Don't be too attached to things that don't work. Do more revisions. Then, get some editors to do their jobs. Go back to your beta readers. Do more revisions. Go back to the editors again. Leave the story sitting for a few months, then come back to it and read it as if it is a new story to you. Fix the things that you find lacking at the point, and do some things over again if needed. That, is how a good story gets it's potential drawn out more and more. Instead of treating things twitter or posting things to get instant gratification. I tried that personally with my first story--let me tell you, there was no gratification. No ego boosts. And no nothing. Why? Because I didn't take writing seriously enough. And, as a reader, I know when author's don't take writing seriously enough. It shows from the first chapter.