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The Saiyan in marvel

Author: Kbreal1997
Sci-fi
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This is a story about a young adult who has died in our universe and is reborn as human in the marvel/dc/movie world/ and his power is saiyan bloodline.he is not week and will get more overpower is the story progresses and the will be a lot battle and for marvel /dc fan this first story so like minded and open minded when you comment .

Chapter 1Chapter 1: Rebirth

In a New York hospital the sound a painful screaming can be heard "Push Mary push" the doctor said to a women having twins she had already pushed out the first baby this was the second baby and then the baby came out but there was no crying and that not all there was he a tail. "why is my baby not crying" Mary asked the doc. The doctor replied "he alive and healthily but you need to be prepared" "prepared for what" asked Mary "he has a tail"the doctor replied "he's my son so it fine" Mary replied. But the baby had something else going in his head. a mine

"Ohh where is this I feel like I am being pushed out of something" the baby happened to be a young man who had already died early that day. "oh that right I died and God said I was going to a movie universe' said the baby in his mind as he was coming out of his mothers stomach. and fell asleep.

just then the mother of the twins look at her kids and said 'the one without the tail will be Peter Parker and the one with the tail will be James parker' see then pass out again and her husband

came and look and his to sons with pride and said in his heart 'you two are the sons of Richard Parker and Mary Parker.

2 hours later James woke up and look and human face in front and said ' HI mother' but came out 'woo woo' and Mary said 'hello little James ' you're older bother Peter asleep say hi' as he looks at Peter he did Not know why he felt he seems familiar. then he fell asleep.

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Not my cup of tea. It reads to me like (what I'd describe as) First Draft work. I find a lot of fanfiction are just posted with minimal editing and with the story not fully fleshed out. I rarely if ever find a story where it is clear the author has gone through some sort of writing methodology. Like write a first draft that is simply vomiting all your ideas and bunnies out onto paper (or wherever you write). A second draft that is the product of reviewing your first draft, figuring out the story you want to tell, figuring out how you want to develop your characters, figuring out your plot, figuring out the best way to do world building, doing some outlining if you need to, and finally writing it (all that being just during the second draft phase). Then after repeating the second phase as many times as needed, you get some beta readers/private readers to give you input on plot, world building, characterisation, and etc. Then do some revisions. Repeat some phases. Add new phases if you find it nessecary. Do more revisions. Cut things up. Don't be too attached to things that don't work. Do more revisions. Then, get some editors to do their jobs. Go back to your beta readers. Do more revisions. Go back to the editors again. Leave the story sitting for a few months, then come back to it and read it as if it is a new story to you. Fix the things that you find lacking at the point, and do some things over again if needed. That, is how a good story gets it's potential drawn out more and more. Instead of treating things twitter or posting things to get instant gratification. I tried that personally with my first story--let me tell you, there was no gratification. No ego boosts. And no nothing. Why? Because I didn't take writing seriously enough. And, as a reader, I know when author's don't take writing seriously enough. It shows from the first chapter.

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