Review Detail of TempestWolf1013 in The Saiyan in marvel

I love the concept but I believe most of us can agree that the story timeline is progressing way to fast like in the first chapter he’s born in the second he like 3-4 in the third he’s 14-15 its way to fast if u slow it down and add more detail and backgrounds for the characters and the story and make the story more rich it would make this novel good