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despacitoh
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Its pretty interesting concept for me But i dont know man the chapter is too short And the opening seems rushed, well im gonna give it a try i hope it will turn much better, well cant judge too fast since its only 2 chap out Keep up the good work man

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The Saiyan in marvel

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ill try to get better this is my first novel so it will take time but i hope to get better