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the author should just concentrate on one book first dont bite more than you can chew... pick one of the book and concentrate on it make it a better story, dont use too much overused tropes it will get boring arrrrggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh!¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡¡
Unfathomable Kingdom
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DevilsMocktailLv10DevilsMocktail
MrDojo:Yo its a new novel give him time to improve, its not like the author is a pro. Don't just go straight to giving him a 1- star rating...
OfronLv13Ofron
The point they are putting out is the guy has 3 books being written at once: this, overpowered system!, and vrmmorpg: cosmic order. As to your comment... Is it hard? he's doing 3 at once....
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